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settling down to a certain rhythm. here are a few notes I made - First scene seems to me to be to active, I feel there | settling down to a certain rhythm. here are a few notes I made - First scene seems to me to be to active, I feel there | ||
should be a quietness in the crowd - & more so since I saw the old [[veterns - crossed out]] veteran funeral at Grant. | should be a quietness in the crowd - & more so since I saw the old [[veterns - crossed out]] veteran funeral at Grant. | ||
2nd scene - | 2nd scene - Audience laughed at God damn that cat & snickered at Reefie for a while after. Two girls about 30 yrs | ||
old left the theatre at this point but I learned afterward that one had fainted outside ([[ | old left the theatre at this point but I learned afterward that one had fainted outside ([[Minis?]] says maybe she's pregnant | ||
but I think it just the crowd (full house except for a few seats. Applause after the act. Kate was fine, Libby I didn't feel so | but I think it just the crowd (full house except for a few seats. Applause after the act. Kate was fine, Libby I didn't feel so | ||
much can't say why - Reefy good. | much can't say why - Reefy good. | ||
3rd scene - Opened hard. George didn't seem to me to to tell her something. [[Parsual?]] was good & got a big hand as he left | 3rd scene - Opened hard. George didn't seem to me to strutting youth nor eve a school youth who wanted | ||
to tell her something . [[Parsual?]] was good & got a big hand as he left | |||
the stage | the stage | ||
4th scene - went grand, new girl as Louise but she seemed to be imitating her predesor [sic]. I didn't like her as well as Laird but | 4th scene - went grand, new girl as Louise but she seemed to be imitating her predesor [sic]. I didn't like her as well as Laird but | ||
Ferd said afterward "she would get it, she's good." | Ferd said afterward "she would get it, she's good." | ||
Revision as of 21:05, 24 July 2023
Dear Sherwood - Marc & Lucille did not get here for Winesburg - mistaken the day Wed. instead of Tues. & they be pressed for time went on. I saw the play last night & it has certainly improved all the actors seem to be settling down to a certain rhythm. here are a few notes I made - First scene seems to me to be to active, I feel there should be a quietness in the crowd - & more so since I saw the old veterns - crossed out veteran funeral at Grant.
2nd scene - Audience laughed at God damn that cat & snickered at Reefie for a while after. Two girls about 30 yrs
old left the theatre at this point but I learned afterward that one had fainted outside (Minis? says maybe she's pregnant but I think it just the crowd (full house except for a few seats. Applause after the act. Kate was fine, Libby I didn't feel so much can't say why - Reefy good.
3rd scene - Opened hard. George didn't seem to me to strutting youth nor eve a school youth who wanted
to tell her something . Parsual? was good & got a big hand as he left the stage
4th scene - went grand, new girl as Louise but she seemed to be imitating her predesor [sic]. I didn't like her as well as Laird but
Ferd said afterward "she would get it, she's good."