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Since my lover has been far away | |||
Since my [[^secret love beloved ]] lover has been far away | |||
I feel like one possessed | I feel like one possessed | ||
[[crossed out: Restless]] Sleepless I lie, [[crossed out: even]] and toss at night | [[crossed out: Restless]] Sleepless I lie, [[crossed out: even]] and toss at night | ||
and have no sedative at hand; | and have no sedative at hand; | ||
and then view the [[crossed out: fluttering poppies]] village churchyard | and [[^then]] I view the [[crossed out: fluttering poppies]] village churchyard | ||
[[crossed out: in the cemetery churchyard]] full of poppies. | [[crossed out: in the cemetery churchyard]] full of poppies. | ||
- We are well off below the ground - | - We are well off below the ground - | ||
I seem to hear it once again | I seem to hear it once again | ||
here once and for all we put away the claws | here [[crossed out: we surrender forever]] once and for all we [[crossed out: slacken]] put away the claws | ||
of the world that tear your hair | of the world that tear your hair | ||
and make your eyes pop out like those of the ewes | and make your eyes pop out like those of the ewes | ||
brought to the slaughter | |||
It must have been the dead who spoke, | It must have been the dead who spoke, | ||
as lovers low & softly speak | as lovers [[^low &]] softly speak | ||
[[crossed out: only] | [[crossed out: only] to him who wept the nights away. | ||
They couldn't bear to hear those cries, | They couldn't [[not]] bear to hear those cries, | ||
[[crossed out: and console and comfort you]] In | [[crossed out: and console and comfort you]] In order to extend the hand, all hands to you | ||
they [[crossed out: had made perforated]] a hole through the dark of night | they [[crossed out: had made perforated]] a hole through the dark of night | ||
to become a flower [[crossed out: over]] on the wall. | to become a flower [[crossed out: over]] on the wall. | ||
Latest revision as of 05:22, 16 December 2022
Since my ^secret love beloved lover has been far away
I feel like one possessed
crossed out: Restless Sleepless I lie, crossed out: even and toss at night
and have no sedative at hand;
and ^then I view the crossed out: fluttering poppies village churchyard
crossed out: in the cemetery churchyard full of poppies.
- We are well off below the ground -
I seem to hear it once again here crossed out: we surrender forever once and for all we crossed out: slacken put away the claws of the world that tear your hair and make your eyes pop out like those of the ewes brought to the slaughter
It must have been the dead who spoke, as lovers ^low & softly speak [[crossed out: only] to him who wept the nights away. They couldn't not bear to hear those cries, crossed out: and console and comfort you In order to extend the hand, all hands to you they crossed out: had made perforated a hole through the dark of night to become a flower crossed out: over on the wall.