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and the quiverings of tears | and the quiverings of tears | ||
And [overwritten: now] then one time, like the tuft of grass | And [overwritten: now] [[^then]] one time, like the [[^tuft of]] grass | ||
which sprouts from a cranny in the wall, | which sprouts from a cranny in the wall, | ||
a word emerged | a word emerged | ||
then another, then many more | then another[[crossed out: word, and]] then [[^so]] many more, | ||
except that [[overwritten: every]] each time, | except that [[overwritten: every]] each time, | ||
the voice [[crossed out: sounded]] resembled | the voice [[crossed out: sounded]] resembled | ||
[[crossed out: like] something dreamed | [[crossed out: like] something dreamed | ||
that you heard at night | that you heard at night | ||
more faintly heard in the daylight after dawn | [[crossed out: and]] more faintly heard in the daylight after dawn | ||
that came back more faintly [[crossed out: in the daylight.]] | that came back more faintly [[crossed out: in the daylight.]] | ||
Latest revision as of 05:22, 17 December 2022
a scanso di - aside from?
Il innamorate Silently without crossed out: drawing a breath, the lovers gazed at one another Their eyes were fixed and shining; but empty time in passing stored within them darkness and the quiverings of tears
And [overwritten: now] ^then one time, like the ^tuft of grass which sprouts from a cranny in the wall, a word emerged then anothercrossed out: word, and then ^so many more, except that overwritten: every each time, the voice crossed out: sounded resembled [[crossed out: like] something dreamed that you heard at night crossed out: and more faintly heard in the daylight after dawn that came back more faintly crossed out: in the daylight.