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[[handwriting]]
Like a dove that with swift movement
Like a dove that with swift movement
Flies with glistening wings outspread
Flies with glistening wings outspread
Near her home and precious loved ones  
Near her home and precious loved ones  
Beats the thin air overhead.
Beats the thin air overhead.
So with Mnestheus, so his sail boat  
So with Mnestheus, so his sail boat  
Cuts the distance more and more
Cuts the distance more and more
'I [unclear] him and the Pietrix which doth
'Twixt him and the Pistrix which doth
Strive to gain the distant shore.
Strive to gain the distant shore.
Now he sees Sergestus struggling  
Now he sees Sergestus struggling  
With his wrecked boat on a rock
With his wrecked boat on a rock
Calling loudly for assistance
Calling loudly for assistance
While the waves his efforts mock.  
While the waves his efforts mock.
Following the great [unclear]
Sails with [unclear] in the prow;
Following the great Chimaera
Sails with [[Gyas?]] in the prow;
Save Cloanthus, he alone seems  
Save Cloanthus, he alone seems  
certain of the vict'ry now.  
certain of the vict'ry now.  
On he comes, amid the clamor
On he comes, amid the clamor
And the plaudit of the crowd,
And the plaudit of the crowd,
Now the racks resond with shouting,
Now the rocks resound with shouting,
Echoing both shrill and loud.
Echoing both shrill and loud.
[[word table on right side, in 3 columns]]
"Aim At Unity Of Thought And Variety of Statement"
      Dr. F.N. Scott
1 Manuscript    |a Legible                    |1 Letters
                                                          2 Spacing
                                                          3 l's and t's
                        b Capitals
                        c Hypheses
                        d Italics
                        e Quotation marks
                        f Punctuations            1 Comma
                                                          2 Semicolon
                                                          3 Colon
                                                          4 Period
                                                          5 Question mark
II Words          a Good use
                      b Formation                1 Verb
                                                          2 Possessive
                                                          3 Spelling
                      c Precision
                      d Simplicity
                      e Brevity
                      f Variety
III Sentences  a Correctness            1 Complete
                                                          2 Subject and verb
                                                          3 Participle and noun
                                                          4 Pronoun and antecedent
                                                          5 Case
                                                          6 Shall, Should
                                                        7 Infinitive
                      b Unity
                      c Mass                      1 Beginning
                                                        2 End
   
                    d Coherence              1 Order of words
                                                      2 Parallel construction
                                                      3 Precise conjunctions
                       
                    e Variety                    1 Periodic and loose
                                                      2 Long and short
IV Paragraphs  a Unity                    1 Topic sentence
                                                      2 Length moderate
                       
                        b Mass                  1* Beginning
                                                      2 End
                                                      3 Properties
                        c Coherence          1 Order of sentences
                                                      2 Parallel construction
                                                      3 Precise conjunction
                                                      4 Tenses
V Theme        a Unity                          Summary in one paragraph
                   
                      b Mass                      1 Beginning
                                                      2 End
                                                      3 Proportion
                      c Coherence                Order of paragraphs
                                    Based on Barrett Wendell's ENGLISH COMPOSITION

Latest revision as of 15:22, 17 June 2021

Very good Metrical Translations typed words on right side of page - transcribed at bottom

handwriting Like a dove that with swift movement Flies with glistening wings outspread Near her home and precious loved ones Beats the thin air overhead.

So with Mnestheus, so his sail boat Cuts the distance more and more 'Twixt him and the Pistrix which doth Strive to gain the distant shore.

Now he sees Sergestus struggling With his wrecked boat on a rock Calling loudly for assistance While the waves his efforts mock.

Following the great Chimaera Sails with Gyas? in the prow; Save Cloanthus, he alone seems certain of the vict'ry now.

On he comes, amid the clamor And the plaudit of the crowd, Now the rocks resound with shouting, Echoing both shrill and loud.

word table on right side, in 3 columns "Aim At Unity Of Thought And Variety of Statement"

      Dr. F.N. Scott

1 Manuscript |a Legible |1 Letters

                                                          2 Spacing
                                                          3 l's and t's
                        b Capitals
                        c Hypheses
                        d Italics
                        e Quotation marks
                        f Punctuations            1 Comma
                                                          2 Semicolon
                                                          3 Colon
                                                          4 Period
                                                          5 Question mark

II Words a Good use

                      b Formation                 1 Verb
                                                          2 Possessive
                                                          3 Spelling
                      c Precision
                      d Simplicity
                      e Brevity
                      f Variety

III Sentences a Correctness 1 Complete

                                                         2 Subject and verb
                                                         3 Participle and noun
                                                         4 Pronoun and antecedent
                                                         5 Case
                                                         6 Shall, Should
                                                        7 Infinitive
                     b Unity
                     c Mass                       1 Beginning
                                                       2 End
    
                    d Coherence              1 Order of words
                                                      2 Parallel construction
                                                      3 Precise conjunctions
                       
                   e Variety                     1 Periodic and loose
                                                     2 Long and short
IV Paragraphs  a Unity                    1 Topic sentence
                                                      2 Length moderate
                       
                        b Mass                   1* Beginning
                                                      2 End
                                                      3 Properties
                       c Coherence           1 Order of sentences
                                                      2 Parallel construction
                                                      3 Precise conjunction
                                                      4 Tenses

V Theme a Unity Summary in one paragraph

                     b Mass                      1 Beginning
                                                      2 End
                                                      3 Proportion
                     c Coherence                Order of paragraphs


                                   Based on Barrett Wendell's ENGLISH COMPOSITION